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colour version will be up on the site within the next 48 hours.
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i tried two new things on this page.
1- backgrounds were done in blue ink (unfortunately, they're all with the same sized pen because that's the only one i had)
2- under-shading which should change the way things feel in the final colour version...? we'll see.
crit welcome. redline if you think it'll help.
thank you everyone who visited the livestream while i inked.
[link]
i tried two new things on this page.
1- backgrounds were done in blue ink (unfortunately, they're all with the same sized pen because that's the only one i had)
2- under-shading which should change the way things feel in the final colour version...? we'll see.
crit welcome. redline if you think it'll help.
thank you everyone who visited the livestream while i inked.
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Kyo's nose in the first panel looks a little too turned away from us for his face angle. Maybe making the ridge more vertical and adding a small bump for the nostril on the other side would help.
Otherwise, fourth panel Grey is freaking awesome.
I sort of like that the background ink isn't different sizes. Maybe having less variety of line thickness with the background will also help with helping the readers' eyes focus on the main things. Or it won't. We'll see, won't we?
Otherwise, fourth panel Grey is freaking awesome.
I sort of like that the background ink isn't different sizes. Maybe having less variety of line thickness with the background will also help with helping the readers' eyes focus on the main things. Or it won't. We'll see, won't we?