sorry for the delay, DA was acting really weird yesterday and wouldn't load for me.
another page of my comic, in its non-coloured format with the rough script.
sharp eyes might notice the weird line through the text balloon in panel 2. that's because panel 2 is actually another piece of bristol, cut to the shape of the panel and glued down overtop. the original panel inking was botched beyond salvation. while this one isn't perfect, it's a marked improvement. bit of a ghetto technique, but when you're dealing with real paper you get kinda creative on mistakes.
who, mites and utini? they're also sibling races who contributed to their mutual downfall and planet's eco-disaster resulting in it being unable to sustain life.